I think the transition from the "title page" to the "blue sky page" is too sudden, basically because of colour crash I guess. Do you think cross fading will be a good idea?
Also, in my opinion, I am sorry to say that, the "spaghetti" typeface which says "Cowboys, heros..." makes it not-so-professional; it does not match the "Hit the Road" hand writing style either. Maybe, try to hand write the "Cowboys, heros..." too?
The rest is nice! Simple and eye-catching.
Just my opinions, nothing offensive, do not take it personally.
The objective is to create short documentaries about quirky places to travel.
Telling stories online is exciting and challenging because of all the tools at our disposal. Documentarians must think on multiple levels at once: words, ideas, story structure, design, interactives, audio, video, photos, judgment.
TV is about showing the news. Print is more about telling and explaining. Online is about showing, telling, demonstrating and interacting.
Rather than creating one 40 minute show I am splitting the segments up so that the content is richer than a typical travel show. It is a cross between documentary and travelogue focusing on peoples "stories".
The content would be online with the idea that when there are enough stories a broadcast version could be made.
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Coupland, Douglas. "City of Glass." Vancouver/Toronto: Douglas & McIntyre, 2000
Harmon, Katherine. "You Are Here." New York: Princeton Architectural Press, 2004
Hayes, Derek. "Historical Atlas of Vancouver & the Lower Fraser Valley." Vancouver/Toronto: Douglas & McIntyre, 2000
Walker, David. "Different Medium Same Stagnant Rates." PDN: The Photojournalism and Editorial Issue August 2007: 46-50
Yates, Dwight. Personal Interview. 18 September 2008.
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I think the transition from the "title page" to the "blue sky page" is too sudden, basically because of colour crash I guess. Do you think cross fading will be a good idea?
Also, in my opinion, I am sorry to say that, the "spaghetti" typeface which says "Cowboys, heros..." makes it not-so-professional; it does not match the "Hit the Road" hand writing style either. Maybe, try to hand write the "Cowboys, heros..." too?
The rest is nice! Simple and eye-catching.
Just my opinions, nothing offensive, do not take it personally.
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